look, I have read it. I know what the plot is, I know the "justification". I just linked the danluu review because it's a thorough dissection.
other than quirrel, the hpmor characters do not have their own lives, they are pure foils for the self-insert protagonist. they behave in stupid ways to make the plot happen and to make the protagonist look smart. harry and quirrel are like a pair of orbiting black holes; they distort the fabric of the narrative around them so that every direction points towards how "smart" and "awesome" they are.
dumbledore is written as a senile idiot. this is indisputable: "this is your father's rock". yes, there's a payoff to it, no, it doesn't make him less of a senile idiot.
worm is superior in every way despite being rushed, because a) most characters have rich enough internal lives that they could be main characters of their own stories (because they were in discarded drafts), b) the protagonist does both awesome and unhinged things without being an annoying author self-insert, c) it doesn't purport to teach the reader science and then get it wrong.
and worm is just a YA novel, it's not highbrow literature. the last novel I read was Master and Margarita ... go read that I guess. even an uncultured dipshit like me can tell you it's on a whole other plane of quality entirely.
this will be my last reply since I'm in the rate-limit sin bin.
other than quirrel, the hpmor characters do not have their own lives, they are pure foils for the self-insert protagonist. they behave in stupid ways to make the plot happen and to make the protagonist look smart. harry and quirrel are like a pair of orbiting black holes; they distort the fabric of the narrative around them so that every direction points towards how "smart" and "awesome" they are.
dumbledore is written as a senile idiot. this is indisputable: "this is your father's rock". yes, there's a payoff to it, no, it doesn't make him less of a senile idiot.
worm is superior in every way despite being rushed, because a) most characters have rich enough internal lives that they could be main characters of their own stories (because they were in discarded drafts), b) the protagonist does both awesome and unhinged things without being an annoying author self-insert, c) it doesn't purport to teach the reader science and then get it wrong.
and worm is just a YA novel, it's not highbrow literature. the last novel I read was Master and Margarita ... go read that I guess. even an uncultured dipshit like me can tell you it's on a whole other plane of quality entirely.
this will be my last reply since I'm in the rate-limit sin bin.